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Don’t Slipses on the Ellipses

Wednesday, September 24th, 2008

Today is National Punctuation Day. In honor of editors everywhere, let’s take a look at the proper use of ellipses, those humble sets of three dots so often misused and abused in a manuscript.

An ellipsis takes the place of words that have been removed from a sentence. For example, here is a full sentence:

His artwork is so striking and so beautiful that it belongs in a museum.

This is the same sentence with some of the words taken out and an ellipsis inserted:

His artwork is so striking … that it belongs in a museum.

Notice that there is a space on either side of the dots.

An ellipsis can also be used to indicate a thought that has trailed off, most commonly when writing dialogue.

Adam scratched his head and said, “I wonder …”

When in doubt about how and where to use an ellipsis (or any of 12 other punctuation marks), Jeff Rubin, the brain behind National Punctuation Day, has an excellent primer on his website.

Working with a Freelance Editor

Thursday, September 18th, 2008

Even brilliant writers can benefit from having an editor look at their writing with fresh eyes. You shouldn’t be trying to edit your own work. Neither should you pass the task to your niece because she did well in Grade 12 English. Editing is a critical component of crafting a book and deserves the attention of a professional.

When evaluating and hiring a professional editor, it helps to be clear about what you need and what you can expect.

To start, you should know what kind of editing you are looking for. There are many different levels and varieties of editing. Probably the three you will encounter the most are substantive editing, copyediting, and proofreading.

Substantive editing
Sometimes called developmental editing, substantive editing looks at both the content and structure of a manuscript as a cohesive whole. Does the story or argument flow logically? Are there obvious gaps in a certain area? Too much information someplace else? Substantive editing can involve re-ordering large chunks of text, removing text, adding text, and even rewriting.

Copyediting
Probably the most misused of all the terms, copyediting is often used as a catchall phrase for any and all kinds of editing. Strictly speaking, however, copyediting checks for errors in grammar, usage, spelling, punctuation and other mechanics of style, internal consistency, cross-referencing, labelling, and so on.

Proofreading
Proofreading is the final review of a fully formatted and typeset manuscript. It’s meant only to catch small errors such as the odd spelling mistake or hyphenation snafu that might have been missed at the copyediting stage, or that appeared during the layout process.

The above definitions are fairly standard but there are variations. Not every editor defines editing terms in the same way. It’s therefore crucial that you discuss in detail the exact nature of the services your editor will provide.

Before hiring an editor, make sure you understand the fee arrangements. Some editors charge by the page or word, while others charge by the hour. Still others charge a flat project fee. One method of charging is not necessarily better than other. Just be sure you know what you’ll get for your money. If you are being charged by the hour, ask the editor to provide an upfront estimate of how long the project will take so there are no surprises when the final invoice arrives.

Here are a few final tips for working with an editor:

  • Some editors specialize either by format, by topic, or both. For example, an editor might be a specialist in audio scripts or might focus solely on medical books. You may want to look for an editor with particular expertise in your subject matter, especially if you are writing about a highly specialized field.
  • Be open-minded towards an editor’s suggestions and changes. It can be hard on the ego to see your painstakingly crafted manuscript go under the editor’s knife. But keep in mind that if an editor is making alterations, it’s because he or she thinks it will improve your work. And in the end, a good product makes you look good too.
  • Establish and maintain clear lines of communication. Know what your expectations are and convey them. Ask the editor to keep you in the loop as the work progresses.

When You Care Enough to Hit Send

Wednesday, September 10th, 2008

Just for fun on this sunny Wednesday, click over to someecards.com for a couple of bookish e-cards with a dry twist.

Amazon Acquires Shelfari

Wednesday, September 3rd, 2008

Extending its dominion yet again, Amazon has acquired Shelfari, a social networking site for booklovers that allows readers to display a virtual bookshelf and share reviews. The announcement came through the Shelfari blog last week.

Earlier in the year, Amazon had chipped in $1 million in funding for the growing site.

The acquisition presents some interesting conflicts for Amazon. Just one month ago, the e-tail giant acquired AbeBooks, a online dealer in used, rare, and out-of-print books. AbeBooks — and now Amazon — is a 40% stakeholder in LibraryThing, a bitter Shelfari rival.

Will Amazon try to buy up the remainder of LibraryThing and merge it with Shelfari? Given the public animosity between the two sites, the more likely course may be for Amazon to divest itself of its LibraryThing holdings.

Whichever way it goes, authors who haven’t been using social networking sites like Shelfari to build word of mouth for their books online should get started. With further integration between Shelfari and Amazon in the cards, more online reviews could easily equal more sales.